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My sister and I! I made the background cause it was easy.

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---EDIT---

I had a comment posted on this picture and things sort of just turned in to this, the writing in BOLD is *Dusha-Soul and the stuff written in italics is me~! Thanks~! Hehee it took a while for me to realise we where roleplaying ^^;

"Onee-sama." I had turned to my sister as she asked, "is this really the right thing?"

"Yes, even though we know there is no chance they'd like us, we need to just see them, at least." I had turned to look around the corner again.

"But how did you get these uniforms?" I had forced the uniform on without explaining, because I knew that she would of thought it wrong. She had froze, a frown appeared on her face. "You didn't."

"Shhh! They're coming!" I whispered. This was our one and only chance to see them, even if it was from a distance. We had both blushed at the sight of them. We had finally seen, Hikaru and Koaru.


Stalker. Kaoru and I do like your attention but you can just come in to the Host Club room. Request us and we will take care of you.
-Hikaru


Hahaa! That's funny. They are from another school and are poor, the one peeking around the corner had to convince two girls to give her their uniforms, cause she and her sister just really wanted to see, just see the brothers before the ripened to old age and died... >.>

Therefore, they are to poor to request them or anyone...


We'll accept you. Haruhi would kill us if we didn't.


Are you sure?

Yes. I want to please Haruhi

Oh... It's okay, thank you anyway, come on onee-chan.

*turns to Kaoru
"It's as you thought. They like to hunt us but that's all they need. At least I have you, Kaoru. *censor*

"Hikaru!"


"NO! You don't understand! Your to good for the two of us. We really want to be with you! But we can see how much you love Haruhi..." a little tears forms in her eye.

"ONEE-SAMA!" The other sister hugs her sister.

"Onee-chan..." Sob, "Let's go before the pieces of my heart get stood on..." Walks up to the twins a bows. "Hikaru, I love you. But I know I am to late, cause your heart belongs to someone else..." Walks a few steps away with her back to the twins.

The other sister does the same thing "Kaoru, I l-l-love you..." And looks them in the face, smiling with a little tear rolling down her cheek.


*Kaoru hugs Hikaru for support. Hikaru holds him.

She is our toy. We are unused to things such as these. And you are right, my heart does belong to someone else. *looks down at kaoru.* He needs me.


"Ashley-sama!" The other sister shouted, as her sister goes up to the twins without looking them in the eye.

"Hikaru. I know you love your brother, and I know you might think that Haruhi is your "toy" but deep down in here," Ashley points at Hikaru's heart. "You love her, whether more than a friend or as a friend. And no girl can compete with that." Looks into Hikaru's eyes, tears rolling down her cheek. "And I know that you," points at Kaoru, "love her as well, Odette and I have no chance," Ashley looks away, "I'm glad she as finally found friends. You two better look after her or I'll be back. Come on Odette let's go see Haruhi and leave"

"Onee-sama." The two sister's walk down the hall. Waving their first and finally farewell.


*Hikaru stares after Ashley and Odette. *Kaoru asks if he's okay.

"I think so...it's just that..."
"I know, Hikaru, I know." *Kaoru hugs Hikaru.

I see what you mean. I guess I never really realized that my irratation over certain boys with Haruhi was really...love. Thank you Ashley-chan. *Hikaru stands there for a while longer.


The twin sister hug Haruhi. Catch up, and leave.

"Onee-sama... are you okay?" Looks at Ashley.

"Lets find an isolated area... please..." Odette nodded, they found a quite and abandoned hall, Ashley collasped against the wall and cried, Odette soon joined, they cried and cried... Ashley stood up slowly taking her sister up in her arms. "Let's go," Odette nodded, "we can probably make last period of school."


Hikaru and Kaoru return to music room 3. Hikaru is silent for the days activities and it worries Kaoru. He is never like this.

However, Kaoru understands what has happened. He had never had the courage to say it to Hikaru but...He is glad that the sisters were able to open his eyes. He watches out the window as the two girls hurry back to school.

Thank you. He says to the retreating figures.


The sisters turn around and faced the Ouran school, Ashley bowed her head, slapped her face and made a fist and mumbled to herself... Odette hugged Ashley.

"I'm okay... I just hope those two find someone, and I would rather it be Haruhi-chan. She deserves them and they deserve her." Ashley and Odette took off the Ouran uniform reveiling their own. "Let's go." Their fingers intertwined and the uniform over their arms. As they ran back to their own school...


I had so much fun with this! I even had I dream of the last piece I commented back to *Dusha-Soul , BEFORE they even replied with all of the last few comments~! Thank you so much *Dusha-Soul I had fun~! ^-^

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You know something I just noticed? I know this is an epic fail but....I never faved this picture....OTL....BUT! Our "First Friend Anniversary" is on the 26th of this month~! Yay~! We've known eachother for like a year now~! *huggles you happy*